Lindsay McMahon
"The English Adventurer"
Jessica Beck
"Director of IELTS Training"

Marisol is the Wizard Winner this month! Today, get some valuable writing tips from this awesome student!

marisol excelled ielts writing task 2

She is living in Australia right now, and is hoping to pass IELTS so she can pursue her Master’s in Architecture.

Some people believe that children today need much more monitoring than in the past. Others, however, feel that children are not given enough freedom. 

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Marisol follows the 3 Keys System when writing essays. First, she brainstorms, and then she writes the essay using the suggestions from the course template.

Before getting into our course, she really didn’t know how to organize her essay!

The last time she took the test, she took the IELTS General Exam. She just wrote without planning in Writing Task 2, and ended up with quite an unorganized essay, and a score of 5!

No doubt she will do better this time!

You should take notes on Marisol’s excellent writing!

Marisol’s amazing introduction:

Parental control has been in the headlines for decades. Some feel that toddlers need more supervision these days; however, I agree with those who say that children should be able to discern without being observed. In the following paragraphs I will explore the rationale for both beliefs, as well as proffer rationale for my own viewpoint on the matter.

How Marisol develops IELTS vocabulary:

She has to read a lot for her Masters- news, books, anything in front of her!

Marisol recommends The Secret-  a motivational book about manifesting your dreams. (Like getting past IELTS!)


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Marisol’s Fantastic Examples

For instance, in 2015 a social experiment in India, shown that kids are able to teach themselves. The investigators installed a computer in a public area of an outdated town, to analyze the human reaction… [followed by 2 more specific details]

Marisol got this example for a TED talk!

So, to write like Marisol, read and watch widely!

Also, when she writes vocabulary in her vocabulary notebook, she also looks for synonyms to write down. This greatly helps expand vocabulary, and it also seeing the relationship helps you remember the new words!

What do you think of Marisol’s advice?

Leave us a note in the comments section below!


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